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Don't you feel the belt is a little high and wide, either that, or the body is not long enough? I know you foreshortened, but to me the belt is a tad problematic. It is either too wide, or does not have enough perspective going further from the viewer...Potentially some shade like you did on the left of the belt (the small shaded tip) may have worked well on the right also where the cape would have blocked some light. It will also have created a farther feel for the belt going around the body if you know what i mean...
Admiring it all morning.
-Gabe